Mrs Fiddlesticks
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'reducing rubbish' articlesI wrote a series of articles for the parish mag - I've reworked them to be less 'local' and wondered if DS would like them. They're in a short series.
Here's what the first page looks like!
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Fee
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Very good 
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marigold
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Excellent! Can I make a teeny suggestion? If you changed "4 bin bags..." to (say) "4 fat bin bags..." it would fit the 10 green bottles tune better  . Or "4 big bin bags..." . Just a thought .
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Mrs Fiddlesticks
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| marigold wrote: | | Excellent! Can I make a teeny suggestion? If you changed "4 bin bags..." to (say) "4 fat bin bags..." it would fit the 10 green bottles tune better . Or "4 big bin bags..." . Just a thought . |
depends how you sing it  with a long stress on the 4 it does work (but I'm not musical so.. If the editors want it and are musical they can edit it as they wish  )
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marigold
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| Mrs Fiddlesticks wrote: | | marigold wrote: | | Excellent! Can I make a teeny suggestion? If you changed "4 bin bags..." to (say) "4 fat bin bags..." it would fit the 10 green bottles tune better . Or "4 big bin bags..." . Just a thought . |
depends how you sing it with a long stress on the 4 it does work (but I'm not musical so.. If the editors want it and are musical they can edit it as they wish ) |
I'm not musical either, so my suggestion might sound awful to the tuneful types . Look forward to seeing the rest of the articles.
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